writing a letter to me friend How i felt if i voyage across the world

Dear Gwynn it's been a tough few weeks or moths...... voyaging  across the world to New Zealand it's been really tough at nights because I've have two palled fast to get away from the sharks. as i continued paddling i was really missing my family and you and also syriah and aretafaye. one night i saw light across the water when i paddle fast as i could to see what was  that light. when i had a look closer i saw the sky tower. i was cheering really loud because i really really proud of myself voyaging across the world . when i got out of the boat i got pick up from my aunty as we were talking she was saying how proud she was of me for sailing across the world from Tonga to new Zealand. 

From Your Best friend Eva